{"id":5468,"date":"2020-01-13T16:26:19","date_gmt":"2020-01-13T21:26:19","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/responseblog.wpengine.com\/?p=5468"},"modified":"2020-09-08T09:27:13","modified_gmt":"2020-09-08T13:27:13","slug":"craft-better-stories-with-shapes-from-kurt-vonnegut","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/responseblog.wpengine.com\/2020\/01\/craft-better-stories-with-shapes-from-kurt-vonnegut\/","title":{"rendered":"Craft Better Stories with Shapes from Kurt Vonnegut"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Storytelling is more than just a marketing buzzword du jour.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.scientificamerican.com\/guest-blog\/it-is-in-our-nature-to-need-stories\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">It\u2019s in our nature to need stories<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> because the very way our brains are <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.headspace.com\/blog\/2017\/09\/18\/brains-demand-narrative\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">hardwired demands narrative<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">. As children, stories teach us to navigate the world. As adults, we craft stories about ourselves and the world around us to help us make critical choices.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">And for the purposes of this post, consider that many of these narratives are about the brands and businesses that we interact with. Just think about the last time you were trying to decide where to grab lunch. Chances are, experiences that you\u2019ve had at each option popped into your head as \u201cstories.\u201d Maybe, there\u2019s a deli with a friendly woman behind the counter who reminds you of someone. An inconsistent sit-down spot that you always forgive because of the character of its decor.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">One could even simply define marketing and advertising as a brand\u2019s chance to influence the story that their target audience is telling about them.\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Ipso facto, if you want your marketing and advertising to resonate, it better tell a good story.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><em><strong>DISCLAIMER<\/strong><\/em><b><i>: <\/i><\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Stories are powerful, but <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/insight.kellogg.northwestern.edu\/article\/persuasive-storytelling\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">they can backfire<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">. Sometimes it&#8217;s best to stick to the facts.\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">A problem that many marketers have with storytelling is that it\u2019s hard to define just what a story is. Does my marketing need a villain? <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/scottjeffrey.com\/heros-journey-steps\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">A hero\u2019s journey<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">? Internal or external conflict? Metaphors?\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">While there are many different ways to tell a story, almost all have at least one thing: a shape.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">During his anthropology graduate studies at the University of Chicago, sci-fi author, Kurt Vonnegut (\u201cSlaughterhouse Five\u201d is his most well-known work) noticed that the Bible\u2019s New Testament and the enduring folk tale Cinderella followed nearly the same story \u201cshape\u201d when charted across a horizontal axis of time and vertical axis of relative happiness.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">He posited that the \u201cshapes\u201d of the stories a culture holds most valuable reveal things about that culture, and submitted his theory for his master\u2019s thesis.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">While his professors rejected the thesis (because \u201cit was so simple and looked like too much fun\u201d), Vonnegut considered the shapes his \u201cprettiest contribution to culture.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">I\u2019ll allow him to explain:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" title=\"Kurt Vonnegut on the Shapes of Stories\" width=\"975\" height=\"731\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/oP3c1h8v2ZQ?feature=oembed\" frameborder=\"0\" allow=\"accelerometer; autoplay; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture\" allowfullscreen><\/iframe><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\" wp-image-5470 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/responseblog.wpengine.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/01\/MayaEilamShapes.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"837\" height=\"663\" srcset=\"https:\/\/responseblog.wpengine.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/01\/MayaEilamShapes.png 969w, https:\/\/responseblog.wpengine.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/01\/MayaEilamShapes-300x238.png 300w, https:\/\/responseblog.wpengine.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/01\/MayaEilamShapes-768x609.png 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 837px) 100vw, 837px\" \/><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Designed by <\/span><a href=\"http:\/\/www.mayaeilam.com\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Maya Eilam<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">These story shapes are everywhere.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Almost every episode of every sitcom uses \u201cman in a hole.\u201d Our favorite lovable cast of weirdos gets into a pickle, then they get out of it.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">I would argue that the classic copywriting formula \u201ccreate the problem, agitate the problem, solve the problem\u201d is just the \u201cman in a hole\u201d story shape.\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Rom-coms are always the \u201cboy meets girl\u201d shape \u2014 star-crossed lovers find each other, then lose each other, but luckily love\u2019s eternal power always conquers all in the last five minutes.\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Forget Cinderella \u2014 \u201cRocky,\u201d \u201cThe Karate Kid,\u201d and most sports movies always steal her shape.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Think about how you structure your marketing and sales stories.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Is it like this?<\/span><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-5471 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/responseblog.wpengine.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/01\/howsalesshapesstories-1024x632.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"421\" height=\"260\" srcset=\"https:\/\/responseblog.wpengine.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/01\/howsalesshapesstories-1024x632.png 1024w, https:\/\/responseblog.wpengine.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/01\/howsalesshapesstories-300x185.png 300w, https:\/\/responseblog.wpengine.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/01\/howsalesshapesstories-768x474.png 768w, https:\/\/responseblog.wpengine.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/01\/howsalesshapesstories.png 1436w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 421px) 100vw, 421px\" \/><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">This is the way things are, now let me tell you why they will be a million times better.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">If we only tell our audience why our product or service is the greatest thing that anybody has ever conceived with no tension or conflict, this doesn\u2019t make our message persuasive \u2014 it makes it sound like BS.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">We cannot be afraid to introduce points of tension and conflict into our content. People love stories because they love struggles that mirror their own.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">A perfect example of this in marketing and advertising is a :60 TV spot produced for the Canadian Paralympic Committee.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" title=\"Unstoppable (60s): A Canadian Paralympic Committee commercial\" width=\"975\" height=\"548\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/zfmcKSFm54w?feature=oembed\" frameborder=\"0\" allow=\"accelerometer; autoplay; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture\" allowfullscreen><\/iframe><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The commercial, made with one continuous tracking shot, starts with an athlete sprinting around a track to the sound of a raucous rock guitar. As the shot continues, you notice that he is running on one leg and a blade prosthetic. He passes wheelchairs strewn across the track, himself training in the gym, and then himself learning how to walk.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">You realize that as he is sprinting around the track, he is sprinting passed every critical event that\u2019s taken him to this point. He dashes forward as his body lays on the surgery room table, and finally, the tragic car accident smolders behind him. The spot ends with a ten-second shot of him triumphantly galloping with the superimposed words: \u201cUNSTOPPABLE.\u201d\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">This incredible ad uses Vonnegut\u2019s \u201cman-in-a-hole\u201d story shape to great effect. At first, it looks and feels like a run-of-the-mill athletic ad that\u2019s focused on performance. This is quickly forgotten when you begin to see everything that the athlete has had to overcome.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Because the ad moves backward chronologically, it puts the audience deeper in a hole as the athlete sprints closer to the tragic accident that led to his amputation. But after only building tension and conflict for the first :50 seconds of the spot, the last :10 are a testament to the incredible will of the human spirit. Despite everything that this athlete has been through, he sprints forward. The message is simple: paralympic athletes are unstoppable.\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">He, and the audience, are out of the hole.\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">It\u2019s important to note that this story was told with a single superimposed word. Stories can be told using a voiceover or copy, but they can also be told with stirring visuals.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">So remember, effective marketing and advertising storytelling can and should mirror the struggles of your audience.\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">When used as a marketing buzzword, \u201cstorytelling\u201d usually refers to bolting on tools from fiction to your advertising. Plot, character, and metaphor are not a panacea for all marketing creative ills. But, the basic build and release of tension that is inherent to Vonnegut\u2019s story shapes is the fundamental building block of any good story.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Try applying these story shapes to almost any brand communication and there\u2019s a strong chance it will better resonate with your audience.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Storytelling is more than just a marketing buzzword du jour.\u00a0 It\u2019s in our nature to need stories because the very way our brains are hardwired&hellip;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":5475,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[672,69,88],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-5468","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-advertising-2","category-inspiration","category-marketing","post-grid"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/responseblog.wpengine.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/01\/shape.jpg","yoast_head":"<!-- This site is optimized with the Yoast SEO Premium plugin v15.4 - 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